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		<title>The Death of Long Copy?</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Jul 2010 22:04:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>sean</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Copywriters beware, the death of long copy may finally be upon us.

Then again maybe not.

Let me explain...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Copywriters beware, the death of long copy may finally be upon us.</p>
<p>Then again maybe not.</p>
<p>Let me explain&#8230;</p>
<p>The company I do some freelance work with recently started testing video in place of long form sales copy.</p>
<p>The results have been amazing. By amazing I mean anywhere from 300% to as high as 2,100% more sales using video in an A/B split test.</p>
<p>So obviously, long copy is dead right?</p>
<p>Wrong!</p>
<p>Get this, the copy is nearly identical and the videos take 20 minutes to sit through just to get to the offer.</p>
<p>In other words, the long copy still works it just works in another medium.</p>
<p>It really shouldn&#8217;t be a surprise, should it?</p>
<p>After all, a 2 minute infomercial will routinely outsell a 30 second spot&#8230; and a 30 minutes spot will for many products outsell the two minute spot.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s why long copy and now long video work:</p>
<p><em>&#8220;Some say, &#8216;Be very brief. People will read [watch] but little.&#8217; Would you say that to a salesman? With a prospect standing before him, would you confine him to any certain number of words? That would be an unthinkable handicap.&#8221; ~ Claude Hopkins chapter 2 Scientific Advertising</em></p>
<p>By the way, there&#8217;s a guy online selling the idea that the long copy sales letter is dead and that video is where you have to be.</p>
<p>Perhaps, but this same guru recently advertised that he was looking for&#8230; wait for it&#8230; Long Copy copywriters for his own business.</p>
<p>Hmmmm. Now that&#8217;s interesting.</p>
<p>Your thoughts?</p>
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		<title>When Short Copy and a Great Photo Get Attention&#8230;</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Jul 2010 18:52:40 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>sean</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Need your opinion on something...

As a direct response copywriter, I've always been told long copy is better than short copy. And I think for the most part that's true.

But are there times when a a well designed ad might be even better?

Here's why I ask...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Need your opinion on something&#8230;</p>
<p>As a direct response copywriter, I&#8217;ve always been told long copy is better than short copy. And I think for the most part that&#8217;s true.</p>
<p>But are there times when a a well designed ad might be even better?</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s why I ask&#8230;</p>
<p>I was driving back from a long 4th of July weekend. We stopped at our usual Pilot Travel Center to top off with fuel, grab a cup of coffee and empty the last drink from two hours earlier.</p>
<p>While there, I picked up an issue of  &#8220;Trucker&#8217;s News&#8221;. I wanted to see if there were any ads that I could haul away for use in my swipe file.</p>
<p>So as I flipped through, I just waited to see if anything would catch my eye.</p>
<p>THEN BAMM!</p>
<p>Out of nowhere, a strange almost comical ad did indeed grab my attention.</p>
<p>Now understand, I am not the target market for this magazine so I&#8217;m not saying this is the best ad in the magazine.</p>
<p>But, have a look:</p>
<div id="attachment_109" class="wp-caption alignleft" style="width: 237px"><a href="http://www.seanmccool.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/Team-Truck-Driver-AD.jpg"><img class="size-medium wp-image-109" title="Team Truck Driver AD" src="http://www.seanmccool.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/Team-Truck-Driver-AD-e1278614341899-227x300.jpg" alt="" width="227" height="300" /></a>
<p class="wp-caption-text">Short Copy That Grabs Attention</p>
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<p>What&#8217;s your first thought?</p>
<p>Personally I think they do a lot of things right in this ad.</p>
<p>The very relevant photo, the red circle, the torn look on the ad, the emotional headline of the ad, even a call to action to visit the website or call.</p>
<p>All very well done.</p>
<p>Sure, there could be a free report&#8230; something like &#8220;7 questions You Must  Ask BEFORE you sign another Team driving contract.&#8221;</p>
<p>But this makes me want to look at the website &#8211; so I did.</p>
<p>Once on the website, the first thing that caught my eye was a $5,000 bonus for Team drivers. That&#8217;s pretty strong if this ad spoke to you.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know the success of this ad, but I am willing to bet it was pretty good.</p>
<p>I&#8217;d love to hear what you think, Leave me a comment below</p>
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